I have been absent for quite sometime. How do you do?

Wish all of you well and I will update this blog more often than before.  I will update answers for the exercises here next week.

See you around.


SPM 2016 Forecast


  1. Report or
  2. Informal letter
  • Report on activities – past tense
  • Report on an ongoing problem – present tense


  1. Poem : The Living Photograph/ What Has Happened to Lulu
  2. Novel : A Character that can be a role model or theme of bravery or family love.


Tips – Directed Writing

I have a handful of tips n I hope the tips are useful.

1. Always write according to the format. (If you forget, no worries. Just write according to the layout that you can remember.)
2. Use a part of the question to begin your writing. (I will show this later)
3. It is best to organise your content points according to the sequence in the question ( this helps the markers a lot)
4. Elaborate each point with a bit of explanation and examples. Make sure they are related.

Later…. to be continued,

Tanjung Rhu by Minfong Ho

To all my students of 4 Anthurium 2016. This is for your semester break. I hope you enjoy reading the story.


Simple yet profound story.  This short story is about a successful man who forgets his roots as a kampong boy in Tanjung Rhu and realises the importance and how much he misses it after his mother’s death. The relationship between Mr T.W Li, a rich businessman and Ah Ma, his mother. Mr Li has his office at Shenton Way and is modern in ways and ideas. Ah ma is traditional with strong religious beliefs and practices ancestor worship. The day after Ah Ma’s funeral, Mr Li recalls the day he told his mother about using binoculars or see far glasses. The strory also looks at the conflict, struggle and tension between modern and traditional society in Singapore through the realtionship between Mr. T.W Li and his mother.Based on this short story Tanjung Rhu Form 4 Literature, Mr Li feels some degree of regret for the way he treats Ah ma after this mother falls ill and later passes away. He never pays much attention to this mother’s stories about the past and realizes a little too late that most of his questions remained unanswered. Mr Li promises to fulfil her last wish but is unable to find the key.

Moral Value

1) Although we live in modern world, we must not forget our traditional values
2) We must learn to appreciate people while we can
3) Money cannot buy everything
4) Learn to respect and tolerate each other
5) We should consider and accept changes in our lives and progress with the time
6) We should always voice out our feelings especially if we want to express feelings of love for a family member especially an old parent.


Read the extract from the short story Tanjung Rhu. Then answer the questions.

  1. ‘Edward’, she said, crossing her legs, ‘come and join us?’

He refused, and was just turning away, when she noticed the binoculars he was holding,

And asked what they were.

‘Oh, these,’ he said. ‘I bought theme today. For the children’. He could not think of anything better to say. (p.20)

a.Who does the pronoun ‘us’ refer to?


b.Why do you think Edward or Mr Li refuses to join them?


c. In your opinion, why didn’t Edward tell the truth about the binoculars he

bought for his mother?



d.What does this incident reveal about the relationship of these two characters?



2.   There was one drawer which would not open. The joss sticks, he thought, must be in there, with all the things that were most important to her. He pulled again at that drawer, harder this time, but it stayed shut. And then he realized that she always kept it locked. And he did not know where she hid the key. (p.35)

a) Where is Mr Li?


b) Why is he looking for joss sticks?


HOTS c) What does the locked drawer symbolise?



HOTS d) If you were Mr Li, what would you do in this situation?




Poison Tree by William Blake

My dear students (5AN,AS,AM). Wish you the best of time for this sem break. This is for you and the rest of you readers. Have fun holidaying!!

A Poison Tree – William Blake

I was angry with my friend;
I told my wrath, my wrath did end.
I was angry with my foe:
I told it not, my wrath did grow.

And I watered it in fears,
Night & morning with my tears:
And I sunned it with smiles,
And with soft deceitful wiles.

And it grew both day and night.
Till it bore an apple bright.
And my foe beheld it shine,
And he knew that it was mine.

And into my garden stole,
When the night had veiled the pole;
In the morning glad I see;
My foe outstretched beneath the tree.


  1. Wrath – strong, stern, or fierce anger; deeply resentful indignation; ire.
  2. Deceit – distortion of the truth for the purpose of misleading; duplicity; fraud; cheating
  3. Wiles – Trick, trap
  4. Veiled – conceal, lacking clarity or distinctness


  1. Personification

–       Waters the wrath with fear

–        I told my wrath, my wrath did end

  1. Metaphor 

-The tree is considered as a wrath/anger

-“Till it bore an apple bright”, the apple is a metaphor for the “fruit” of his grudge.

  1. Alliteration 

-sunned and smiles

-friend and foe

-bore and bright

  1. Imagery

– Throughout the poem

  1. Irony

-the foe beneath the tree of hatred

  1. Repetition

-“I was angry with my friend… I was angry with my foe”

  1. Allusion

-“Garden.. apple…tree” alludes to Adam & Eve, the Garden of Eden.


Stanza 1: The persona speaks of someone, his friend and his foe, whom he is angry with. When he says ‘I told my wrath, my wrath did end’ after he said he was angry with his friend, he is saying he was able to get over being angry with his friend and forgot about it. Although, it is quite the opposite when he mentions’ I told it not, and my wrath did grow’. The persona is saying that with his enemy, he allows himself to get angry, and therefore, his wrath does grow.

Stanza 2: In this stanza, the persona begins to make his anger grow and he takes pleasure in it, comparing his anger with something, in this case, a tree or plant. The speaker says he ‘sunned it with smiles’ and ‘and with soft, deceitful wiles’. This means he is creating an illusion with his enemy saying he is pretending to be friendly to seduce and bring him closer.

Stanza 3: ‘And it grew both day and night’ and ‘til it bore an apple bright’ are meaning that his illusion with his enemy is growing and growing until it became a strong and tempting thing. His illusion has a metaphor and it is an apple. After, his foe believes it shines, which means he thinks it’s true and means something, and takes the persona’s illusion seriously. ‘And he knew it was mine’ suggests that he really thinks the persona is his friend.

Stanza 4: Being the last stanza, the persona needed to come up with a conclusion. He has used the two lines ‘in the morning glad I see’ and ‘my foe outstretched beneath the tree’ to say that his foe finally fell to his tempting illusion and metaphorically, consumed his poison apple and died. So, obviously, his malicious intentions were hidden behind illusion and he prevailed over his enemy.


In the first stanza, the consequence of allowing anger to continue instead of stopping it as it begins is shown. This consequence is simply that it will continue to grow. However, as the poem progresses, it is seen that this continued growth of anger can yield harmful results as the enemy, or foe, is lured toward the tree and eats of its fruit, the poison apple. This kills his foe, as he is seen outstretched beneath the tree, a sight the speaker is glad to see the next morning. These final two lines explain one of the main themes of the poem, which is that anger leads to self-destruction. The speaker’s anger grows and eventually becomes so powerful that it has changes from simple anger with another person, to desire to see them dead. One of the subjects of the persona’s work was the underworld, or Hell, and knowing this, it can be seen that the destruction which results from anger is not physical, but spiritual. In addition, the death of the foe, which the speaker is glad to see, does not spiritually affect the foe as the speaker is affected, but only physically harms the foe.


1. Why did the persona’s wrath end when he told his friend about it?

2. What happened when he did not tell his foe?

3. How did the persona nurture his wrath?

4. Why is ‘and’ repeated three times in stanza 2?

5. What type of literary device is used in ‘soft deceitful wiles’? Why?

6. What does the poem’s title suggest about the content?

7. In your opinion, what is the persona really doing in stanza 2?


Captain Nobody – Important events

Captain Nobody

Captain Nobody foils a robbery.

  • JJ gives Newt an emergency call on the walkie-talkie. She is upset about the spelling mistakes on the signs outside Sullivan’s Jewelry Store. She insists that Captain Nobody (Newt) talk to Mr & Mrs Sullivan about this.
  • Captain Nobody enters the store when a robber is actually pointing a hidden gun at the Sullivans. This creates a distraction which gives Mrs Sullivan the chance to press the alarm and alert the police.
  • The robber flees. The news is widely reported on television. Everyone wants to know more about Captain Nobody, but Newt is not hungry for publicity.

Captain Nobody prevents an air crash

  • Newt and his friends are taking the mascot – Ferocious the Ferret – to Newt’s home. On the way, they are confronted by Ricky Ratner and his seventh-grade gang. In the struggle between the two groups, the door of the cage springs open and the ferret springs out.
  • Newt and his friend chase after it to get it back. The ferret runs across the freeway and back several times with Newt chasing it. All traffic comes to a standstill.
  • By coincidence, a small airplane with passengers has engine failure and needs a clear track for an emergency landing. The pilot sees the cleared freeway and manages to make a safe landing. All lives are saved. Again the news is widely reported and the public interest in the mysterious Captain Nobody grows to an intense level.

Captain Nobody ‘rescues’ Reggie Ratner

  • There is a city-wide public alarm that Reggie Ratner has climbed the Appleton Water Tower to jump to his death. Captain Nobody climbs to the top of the tower to tell Reggie that he knows the truth – that it is not Reggie who has collided with Chris.
  • Newt learns that Reggie’s purpose in climbing the tower is not to commit suicide. He helps to free Reggie’s foot which is stuck in a hole on the rooftop.
  • Both make the descent in full view of the crowd below. Newt lands first, followed by 280-pound Reggie who lands on him, causing him to break his leg and two rib bones. Newt is place in the hospital with Chris, his brother who is still in a coma.

Captain Nobody – Chapter Summary



It is the last Friday in October, everybody in Appleton is excited for the derby of an American football game between the Ferocious Ferrets of Fillmore High School and the Chargers of Merrimac High School – also known as the Big Game.
Newton Newman (Newt) has a big brother, Chris Newman (Chris),who is a local football star, who plays for the Ferocious Ferrets after an electrifying debut two years back.
Newt is preparing breakfast for his family when he comes across an article of his brother in the Sports section of the local newspaper.
At first, Newt is eager to show the article to Dad but he is held down when the phone rings.
On the other hand, Mom is also busy receiving a call from their neighbour.
Newt gets frustrated as both of his parents have not touched their breakfast.
To make himself feel useful, Newt goes upstairs to woke his brother up.
Annoyed with Newt’s bellow, Chris throws a pillow at him but ends up hitting the floor hard.


Appleton Elementary is packed with different kinds of kids and actions.
At times, he tries to be friendly and greets his classmates but often, they just stare back fiercely and ignore him.
Before the classes start, Newt finds a quiet place for him to settle down.
He takes out one of his Secret Superhero Sketchbooks and starts playing with his imagination.
Newt has never shown his sketching of the superhero characters to anyone else except to his two best friends, Cecil and JJ, who have utmost admiration towards Newt’s creativity.
Cecil alerts them of the coming Halloween and suggests that they celebrate it as usual.
Talking about celebrating Halloween, the three of them are bored with their own costumes as they have been wearing the same outfits for years.
Eventually, Cecil suggests that each of them needs to come out with an outstanding Halloween costume based on their ‘inner other’ that will catch everybody’s attention.

During social studies class, Newt is still searching for an idea for his Halloween costume.
He imagines himself as Zeus, the god of lightning according to the Greek myth, but soon realises that he does not fit in the descriptions shown by his subject teacher.
Not giving up, he raises his hand asking Mrs. Young what the American pioneers wore when they built the country.
Although Newt is ridiculed by his classmate, the answer given by his teacher is more than enough for him to rule out the possibility of having such costume for Halloween.
The school ends early so the students and locals can watch the Big Game Pep Parade on the street.
Newton is ecstatic to attend his brother’s last game of the season. On the other hand, Cecil and JJ are more incline to their Halloween costumes.
That has put Newt back in dilemma as he is having hard time thinking about his own Halloween costume.
Newt falls asleep while figuring out the design of his costume only to wake up after he has a terrible dream.
It is time for the Big Game as his parents are getting ready for it and with heavy heart, Newt has to put aside his coming Halloween celebration and shift his focus on the final game.


Newt stops thinking about Halloween when he recalls the moment Chris mentions Reggie Ratner, an opponent from Merrimac High, who has always been holding grudges against his brother.
To make it worst, during the Big Game, the crowd play sentiment on both Chris and Reggie.
Newt, who is now away from his bleacher, is shown his way out after he fails to present his seat ticket to the person in charge.
When the final quarter starts, both teams are level and unfortunately, Newt is forced to watch the game from outside the wire fence surrounding Fillmore Field.
He can see that the Home team, especially his brother, is playing their hearts out until the game reaches its last 45 seconds – the Away team is leading by two points.
Without giving up, the Big Game is getting more intense during the last seven seconds.
The Ferrets show high determination and Chris manages to get a last minute touchdown.
There are mixed feelings on the ground as the opponents bow down to their defeat and the home crowd is jubilant with the winning streak.


Chris is unconscious as the result of the winning touchdown.
The whole ground is in complete silence when Chris is being attended and brought to the hospital.
Chris’ test results come out and fortunately he is not suffering from any broken parts, he is just in coma.
Back in his room, Newt still cannot forget what happened during the winning touchdown as he describes it as the thunderous crash.
He tries to revert his concentration to Halloween as the Big Game incident keeps rewinding in his mind.
The next day, Newt answers various callers trying to get some news about Chris.
Cecil and JJ drop by at Newt’s house to give a few things to cheer him up.
The local community is talking about the touchdown incident and starts calling it the Big Tackle.
Cecil also tells Newt that some of the Ferrets get some revenge on Reggie, the Chargers’ defensive back who is accused of causing Chris to get into his coma.
As the Newt recalls the Big Tackle, JJ tries to divert his attention by asking about their Halloween plan.
Speechless, Newt tries to avoid Halloween by saying that he has lots of chores to settle.
Both Cecil and JJ are not convinced and they decide to meet the next day at 6.00 p.m for Halloween.


Newt is frantically searching for idea as he is running out of time to come out with his Halloween costume and falls asleep soon after.
By noon, Newt is still clueless about his costume and he decides not to celebrate Halloween.
He then falls asleep when sketching his latest fantasy superhero character.
Mom is already home when Newt wakes up.
After peeping at Mom holding his brother’s sweatshirt, Newt asks if there is anything he can do to cheer her up.
But Newt is told that he could do nothing for the moment.
Taken aback by Mom’s words, he decides to prove that he is useful in such stressful situation.
Just before he can cheer Mom up by wearing his brother’s football jersey, she has already left home for the hospital.
In the meantime, Cecil and JJ arrive at Newt’s doorstep.
Newt clumsily opens the door only to find that he is in awe of his two friends.
Cecil disguises himself as the famous musician, Mozart whereas JJ is dressed up as Splendida, a fictional character from her favourite book.
Lastly, the big and important question pops out, ‘What is Newton Newman going to be for Halloween?’


Newt is out of words when is asked to explain about his outfit as he is wearing his brother’s pieces of clothing.
JJ asks Newt if there is something wrong with his brother.
Newt replies that his brother is doing fine.
He does not want to let his best friends down so he insists that both of them should continue celebrating Halloween without him.
Newt finally confesses that he does not have a costume for himself and he immediately explains everything that he did in search for a suitable costume before Cecil and JJ can respond to the confession.
After a long silence, Cecil and JJ decide to transform Newt’s outfit on the spot.
Both of them alter the pieces of clothing that Newt is wearing and eventually they manage to produce an outstanding costume.
They reach the ultimate transformation when JJ cuts two small holes on the sweatband that Newt is wearing o his forehead and change it into a mask.
Newt himself feels rejuvenated after looking at himself in the mirror.
The three of them feel ecstatic as they finally manage to celebrate the Halloween together.


When they arrive at the first stop, the lady and her husband living in the house are rejoiced when they look at Cecil, JJ and Newt.
The lady has perfectly guessed Cecil’s and JJ’s Halloween costumes.
Then, the couple turns their attention to Newt, who is still searching for an identity of his own as he has not named his alter ego yet.
The lady’s husband notices C.N. on the middle of Newt’s forehead and he directly asks them about those initials.
Surprised by the question, Newton is tongue-tied at first while both Cecil and JJ are quick enough to throw some hints when they see Newton first reaction after being asked by the man.
Eventually, Newt manages to overcome his own fear and he reveals himself as Captain Nobody, C.N.


After they leave the first house, Cecil and JJ really like the idea of ‘Captain Nobody’
JJ gets a bit emotional as she can see that Newt seems to forget about his brother’s critical condition after being enthusiastic of becoming Captain Nobody.
This time around, it is Newt who breaks the awkward moment and urges his two best friends to focus on celebrating Halloween.
On that night, people show great interest into the three of them.
The attention that they get has been joyful especially for Newton.
He feels more confident being Captain Nobody than being Newton Newman.
Cecil and JJ are also aware of Newt’s change of attitude when they are counting their trick-or-treat collection under the street lights.
When Newt arrives at his house, his mother has already hit the sack.
He is a little bit disappointed because he wants to show his Halloween costume to her.
Just before he falls asleep, Newt reassures himself by saying that he is not supposed to be anybody, he is Captain Nobody.


Newt, who has always been positive about his brother, cannot stop ruling out the worst outcome of his brother’s condition and he feels uneasy about it.
Then, he quickly realises that he needs to get ready for school.
He tries to look for his school outfit and after he fails to find an appropriate one, he goes to school with the Captain Nobody’s costume.
There are mixed reactions from his classmates; some make fun of him wearing the outfit but Cecil and JJ show support for his wild wardrobe choice.
Mrs. Young successfully manages the situation in the class from going haywire as all eyes are set on Captain Nobody and a few kids start mocking him.
In the Principal’s office, a discussion is going on between Principal Toomey and Mrs. Young while Captain Nobody waits outside.
On a serious note, Mrs. Young jumps into a conclusion that Newt is having a hard time coping with his brother’s latest condition and she reports that Newt insists of being called Captain Nobody.
After that, a more heated discussion is going on after the school counsellor and nurse join in and later on, the principal tells Newt that Captain Nobody is welcomed in the school.
During lunch break, Cecil and JJ insist of becoming Captain Nobody’s sidekicks and tell Newt to continue becoming Captain Nobody because people start to notice them ever since.


Newt runs home after he realises that his parents still do not know about Captain Nobody and he does not want to get weird reaction from them.
As he is running, Cecil summons for Captain Nobody and thinking he is joking, Newt just ignores it.
Although feeling reluctant, Newt decides to respond to the call and meet Cecil at the corner of Wareen and Kander streets.
Cecil leads their way, together with a wagon, passing by Dumpsters and garbage cans until they stop at one point.
There is a big bass drum which has been thrown away, sitting on the of the Dumpster that catches Cecil’s attention.
Feeling determined to own the drum, Cecil is feeling hopeful that Captain Nobody will lend his hands to get it down from the top of he Dumpster.
Newt is afraid of heights. So, he suggests Cecil to be the one who should climb the Dumpster.
After Cecil makes it clear that the job is meant for the fearless Captain Nobody, Newt changes his mind.
Captain Nobody climbs on and carefully passes the drum to his sidekick, Cecil who is waiting with open arms on the ground.
As Captain Nobody is about to settle down, he screams his lungs out when a hand suddenly comes out from the pile of cardboard boxes and grabs him by his ankle.


Surprised by the incident, Cecil shouts at the old man who is holding Captain Nobody’s ankle and the old man quickly releases his hand off.
Captain Nobody recognises the familiar face of the old man, Mr. Clay, who used to be a locksmith, because his mother has used some of his services when she was in trouble.
Cecil is still skeptical about Mr. Clay and tries to warn Captain Nobody that the old man might be dangerous to them.
Captain Nobody claims that the old man is not harmful to them, it is just that he is suffering from a diseases, Alzheimer.
Mr. Clay drops his plastic medicine bottle into Captain Nobody’s hand which immediately explains the old man’s situation.
After introducing himself as Captain Nobody, he and Cecil walk Mr. Clay home.
Captain Nobody knows where the old man lives as he always parks his cherry red van in front of his house.
Mrs. Clay is relieved when she sees her husband standing at the front door of their house.
Mr. Clay explains that he is rescued by Captain Nobody.


Newt heads home and gets excited when he sees his father’s car in the driveway.
In the kitchen, Dad meets Captain Nobody for the first time.
A moment after that, Dad starts to apologise to Newt because he has received several calls from the school.
After the meeting in the Principal’s office, the people from school think that Captain Nobody appears in school because he is so upset about his brother’s condition.
Newt tries his very best to reason with Dad about being Captain Nobody outside the house.
Dad feels relieved after Newt manages to assure him that he is still being himself and his alter ago is just some sort of confidence booster.
Dad even takes a photo of Captain Nobody and sends it to Mom.
Suddenly, the walkie-talkie squeals in the middle of their conversation.
Cecil makes contact just to ask a silly favour from Captain Nobody and Newt, who is in disbelief, starts to make a weird sound through the walkie-talkie as if the device is running out of battery.
As Newt is about to sleep, Dad tells him that Mom is having a good laugh about Captain Nobody and she starts showing the image to everybody in the hospital.
Dad explains about the current situation and hospital procedures that they need to follow and he assures Newt will be the first one to visit if the situation improves.


The next morning, nobody is making fun at Newt disguising as Captain Nobody and even Mrs. Young addresses him accordingly.
Later on, after Cecil explains to JJ how to operate her walkie-talkie, the three of them decide to test their new mode of alternative communication.
As Newt is about to respond on the walkie-talkie, a football hit at the back of his head.
It comes from the students in the seventh grade and one particular kid named Ricky Ratner approaches Newt in a non-friendly manner.
Ricky, who happens to be Reggie’s cousin, wants Newt to make everyone know that Reggie is not the culprit of the Big Tackle that leads to Chris’s critical condition.
Things are about to get uglier during the heated conversation between Ricky and Newt when suddenly all of the fourth graders stand up for Newt, Cecil and JJ.
Before the crowd disperses, the confrontation ends with a threat from Ricky for Newt.
Cecil makes a point that the vibes coming from Captain Nobody make everyone in the fourth grade becomes more courageous.
After what had happened, Newt has to carefully sneak out from the school.
He is shocked the moment JJ calls for Captain Nobody’s help through the walkie-talkie.
Captain Nobody dashes to the Sullivan’s Jewelry Store after their conversation ends with JJ screaming at the other end of the line.


Captain Nobody is almost out of breath when he arrives at the curb in front of Sullivan’s Jewelry store.
JJ cannot get herself over with the spelling and grammar mistakes found on the cardboard signs in the jewelry store.
She has tried talking to the Sullivan but she is ignored by the couple.
JJ insists that Captain Nobody can make a difference if he goes in and talk to the owners.
Feeling obliged to the duty of a superhero, Captain Nobody steps into the store where he can clearly see Mr. and Mrs. Sullivan at the far end with their only customer.
Afraid that he is interrupting their business, Captain Nobody wants to leave the store but the couple insists that they will be hearing anything from him.
Captain Nobody cannot believe his eyes as he stares at the customer’s sweatshirt because he is holding a gun inside of the pocket.
The situation becomes more chaotic when Mr. Sullivan manages to sound the alarm in the store.
Before the robber flees the scene, he threatens Captain Nobody not to report the incident to the authority or something bad will happen to him.
After being warned, Captain Nobody immediately walks out the store and wants to leave the scene.
JJ tries to convince Captain Nobody to talk to the police about the robbery.
Both of them run away when Captain Nobody explains about the threat he has received from the robber.


Newt reaches home late after the robbery.
Although terrified with the incident, he is able to sense something is not going well after hearing Mom’s response.
The conversation is halted when the phone rings for Mom.
Newt helps himself in the kitchen and watches the television.
To his surprise, the news is reporting on the robbery in the Sullivan’s Jewelry Store.
He is quite annoyed with the news report as Captain Nobody is referred as ‘the little guy’, ‘a midget’ and even as ‘a leprechaun’.
JJ phones Newt to talk about the news report and he reminds JJ not to spread a word about the incident.
That night, Newt to talk about the news report and he reminds JJ not to spread a word about the incident.
That night, Newt is having dinner with Mom and both of them seem to have secrets that they do not wish to reveal to one another.
Before he goes to bed, he reflects all the bad and good incidents that Captain Nobody has gone through.
He dreams about his brother again, but this time Chris addresses him as ‘Captain’ and Newt feels proud to be acknowledged by his brother.
The next morning, he comes to a huge relief after hearing the first news because the robber has been arrested.
The second news, however, is not that promising. He finds a crumpled paper in the trash bin.
He is now aware that Chris will be in more serious trouble if he does not wake up after 6 days.
He realises that his parents are heavily distracted because of the bad news and he is determined to make the situation becomes better.


Darryl and Colby are on a special tour to show supports to Chris Newman after the Big Tackle incident by bringing along the team ambassador, Ferocious the Ferret.
A lucky student will get the chance to bring Ferocious home for one day.
Newt gets to babysit the animal and he is unhappy about it since he has a plan to visit his brother after school.
As the three of them are walking home, Ricky Ratner and six of his friends are blocking their way.
Unlike before, this time around, Ricky is angrier as his cousin, Reggie, is still being hassled by Chris’s friends.
Ricky notices the ferret and he signals his friends to scramble the animal’s cage.
Suddenly, the cage door opens and Ferocious jumps out and gets away.
Captain Nobody, Cecil and JJ chase the animal off until they reach the highway.
Captain Nobody needs to come at the rescue for once again and this time, he dodges the incoming traffic light just to get Ferocious back.
Being overwhelmed by the dangerous situation, Captain Nobody waves frantically, hoping for the vehicles to stop.
As soon as the traffic stops, just about in the nick of time, a small aeroplane carrying passengers makes an emergency landing on the highway!
Everybody who is at the scene cannot believe their own eyes and when the word seems to stop for a moment, Ferocious sits on Captain Nobody’s ankle and he scoops the ferret up safely.


After Ferocious the Ferret has been caught, they leave the place as they need to gather their things that they have left by the roadside.
At Newt’s house, the news about the aeroplane landing has become a sensation.
Every person who is interviewed in the news gives their thoughts about the incident, also mentioning what Captain Nobody has done in stopping the busy traffic.
The reporter concludes that it is undecided either Captain Nobody is good or evil.
Cecil and JJ insist that they should go back to the highway and explain about the whole situation.
Captain Nobody, on the other hand, feels that he should revert himself by becoming Newton Newman after what he has been through.
By the time Cecil and JJ leave the house, it is already too late for Newt to visit his brother.
Around dinner time, Dad calls to inform that he is going to stay over at the hospital with Mom.
Newt also informs that his days as Captain Nobody are already over.
That night, he dreams about the highway incident which then suddenly the Big Tackle incident starts to rewind.
At the end of the dream, Newt learns that it is Darryl Peeps who had clashed his helmet against his brother’s.


The next morning starts off with Newt having breakfast with Mom.
Newt mentions that he knows about Chris only has 6 days to wake up and he suprises Mom by announcing that he is going to visit Chris later on that day.
Although he pledges that he will not be wearing the costume again, he stuffs the outfit into his backpack and heads for school.
He realises that he feels so lonely and ignored after returning to school as Newton Newman.
When Newt is heading for his lunch break, he notices a lot of teachers rushing into the faculty lounge and gather around the television.
There is news on the television reporting about Reggie Ratner wants to jump off the Appleton water tower after feeling depressed since the Big Tackle incident.
Newt is in dilemma as he claims that he is the only one who knows the truth about the Big Tackle incident.


As JJ trying to lift Captain Nobody to get a good trip on the second rung of the ladder, a policeman approaches them.
Cecil feels dutiful as Captain Nobody’s sidekick and he tries to shift the officer’s attention and it works.
Although the water tower supportive structures, including the ladder, are not as strong as it used to be, Captain Nobody manages to slither his way to reach Reggie Ratner despites the other challenges that he had to face.
On top of the tower, they both talk to each other about the Big Game and the series of event that has been happening after the incident.
Captain Nobody learns that Reggie climbs the tower to vandalise the water tank.
The truth is actually Reggie’s left foot is stuck and he needs Captain Nobody to untie his shoelace of which Captain Nobody manages to help Reggie and it is broadcasted through the news channels in the country.
Then, when they reach at a critical point, Reggie becomes unconvinced since Captain Nobody needs to climb the ladder down first.
As Captain Nobody is counting every step down, he is surprised to see Reggie is also getting his hands on the ladder.
Trying to find his balance with his feet dangling on the air, Captain Nobody loses his grip and falls down.


Captain Nobody feels time is passing by rapidly and everything seems to fall into pieces at the same time.
Fortunately, a huge, inflated rubber mattress catches him from hitting the hard ground.
Captain Nobody is about to celebrate his safe touch on the ground when he suddenly sees a massive figure falling to his landing spot.
Captain Nobody swoons himself as the result of the impact by the huge Reggie Ratner.


Newt does not realise that he is in the hospital until Mom explains that he suffers from a broken ankle and ribs.
From his bed, he sees Cecil on the television responding to the media on behalf of Captain Nobody.
Mom and Dad begins to tell what had really happened after Captain Nobody passes out and they cannot stop worrying about him since the live broadcast appears on the television.
Suddenly, Reggie shows up and visits Newt with a lot of reporters waiting eagerly behind the sliding door of the recovery room.
Watching at his parents feeling a bit bitter towards Reggie, Newt begins to reveal that it was actually Darryl Peeps who knocks Chris out during the Big Tackle.
From the recovery room, Newt is transferred into the same room where his brother has been lying motionlessly.
Although finally he has the chance to meet his brother in the hospital, he feels useless as he cannot help his brother to wake up. He wishes to tell his brother about Captain Nobody.
While he is thinking to himself and rewinding the memory that he has in the morning of the Big Game, Newt lets out a scream, ‘HIT THE SHOWERS!’ without realising it.
The nurses rush in and as he is about to explain to them, Chris throws a pillow at his head, just like what he will do at home.
Chris is finally awake!


It seems the happiest celebration in the hospital the moment Chris wakes up from his coma.
Newt, too, is getting the attention that he has never experienced before.
He wants to be the first to talk to Chris but the shot given by the nurse earlier makes him fall into his sleep.
Newt wakes up in the next morning and finds himself at his own house .
Cecil and JJ are also in the house and they start talking about the media coverage that they get after the water tower incident.
On the other hand, Chris is nowhere to be seen in the house as he is attending a local television morning show.
The hostess and Chris talk excitedly about what had happened and at the end of the show, Chris shocks everyone who is watching.
Chris insists that the victory parade should be led by the real hero, Captain Nobody, instead of the winner of the Big Game.
That night, although Newt cannot get rid of the pain, he refuses to take the painkiller because he wants to wait for Chris instead of falling asleep.
When Chris arrives home, they set their eyes for good since the Big Game incident and miraculously, Newt can feel the pain fading away.


The parade is one of the memorable moments for Appleton because for the first time, the Fillmore High School band is joined by Merrimac’s marching band.
Darryl Peeps is not blamed for the Big Tackle and even Reggie gets backs his peaceful life.
To reward their special contributions to the society, Newt, Cecil and JJ receive a token of appreciation from the Sullivan couple, the pilot and passengers of the small aeroplane and MR. Clay the locksmith respectively.
When they reach home, the normal routines get back on track, with Mom asking Newt where she has misplaced most of her belongings and Dad gets himself busy with his phone and beeper.
But, it is not the same story for Newton Newman since all the exposure that he has after becoming Captain Nobody.
Newt is now as popular as his brother, Chris, and event at one point, Chris tells Newt about a weird incident during the parade.
A little old lady from outside town claims that she did know that Newton Newman has an older brother and that has made Newt laugh heartily.
The ending comes to a point when Chris jokingly says that there is a monster under Newt’s bed just before he switches off the light.


tips spm 2014


You must be very nervous especially with the ongoing debate whether the format is changed or not. In my opinion, always read the questions carefully and plan on how you are going to answer them. I have a very trustworthy resource that IT IS NOT TRUE! However, always be prepared.

Paper 1

1. Read – underline important keywords . Write about – after that is the format and your topic. Write the points according to the sequence given. Easy for you to do a checklist and easy for the marker to locate the points in your essay.

2. Elaborate when needed. Must be precise. Remember the structure or your sentences and the accuracy of your language – more important than your vocabulary. Your vocabulary must be precise. Note that I use MUST.

3. If you forget or write the format wrongly, do not panic. The format is 3 marks. You have the remaining 32 to fight for. (the current gossip is there is no allocation of marks for format. Just read and answer with what the question wants.

4. For continuous writing,

– always read and analyse what the questions want. Write about what you can write best even if you don’t like the topic. When writing about a current issue, be on a neutral ground without condemning anyone or any political party. Your opinions must be supported with logical and mature reasoning.

– Remember the structure or your sentences and the accuracy of your language – more important than your vocabulary. Your vocabulary must be precise. Note that I use MUST. Do you need to write idioms and proverbs? If they fit the situation and you use them correctly, it is a merit, otherwise it is a penalty. You do not have to count how many words you have written.

Actual SPM Questions (Paper 1 Sect B 50 marks)


– You must be able to describe with a lot of adjectives and importantly your description must be interesting.

2003  : A day you wished had never happened

2004  : Describe a festival celebrated in your area

2005  : Describe the biggest challenge in your life

2006 : Describe an enjoyable weekend you have experienced
2007 : Describe an embarrassing experience in your life

2008 :  Write about a person who has worked hard to succeed in life.

2009 : Describe an unforgettable incident that you saw on your way home from school.

2010 : Describe the most popular student in your school.
2011 : A famous person you admire.
2012 : Describe an outing with friends

Opinion / Argumentative

-If you are well read and able give more than sufficient supporting details, choose this.

2003 : You have been given a chance to visit a country of your choice. Which country would you choose and why?
2004 : How can we help promote tourism in Malaysia?
2005 : If you were given a chance to be anybody, who would you want to be and why?
2006 : How can television help students in their studies?
2007 : ‘Teenagers today are only interested in entertainment.’ Do you agree?
2008 : Examinations – good or bad?
2009 : School children should not have long holidays. Do you agree?
2010 : “The Internet is mostly a good thing.” Do you agree? Support your opinion.
2011 : Should school students have part-time jobs? – Discuss
2012 : Should parents give children more freedom


–  You must have a very good foresight and creativity to explain in detail.

2003 : An invention you cannot live without

2004 : My ideal school

2005 : How to keep one self healthy
2006 : What changes would you like to see in your life in the next ten years?
2007 : My early years.

2008 :  My perfect future husband or wife

2009 : My favorite day of the week

2010 : What we can do to save the environment?
2011 : The best things in life are free
2012 : Saving money for future

Story Telling / Narrative

2003  : Write a story that ends with: If only I had listened to his/her advice

2004  : Write a story ending with: “We had never laughed so much in our lives.”

2005 : Write a story with the title: An Unexpected Visitor

2006 : Write a story ending with: “If only I had been more careful, that wouldn’t have happened.”

2007 : Write a story beginning with: Kim was nervous when the door opened

2008 : Write a story ending with: “Now I realize the value of a true friend.”

2009 : Write a story ending with: “…We said our goodbyes and went our separate ways.”

2010 : Write a story beginning with:“It had been raining all day…”

2011 : Write a story that ends with: “…They looked at each other and smiled meaningfully.”

2012 : Write a story beginning with : “The teacher walked into the classroom. It was the first period….”

– As best as you can write your essay as teenager and as locally set as you can. It desnt sound as memorized. I dont encourage students to memorize because it is no more creative writing.

One Word

2003 : Friends

2004 : Clothes

2005 : Music

2006 : Food
2007 : Tomorrow
2008 : Stars
2009 : Beauty
2010 : Home
2011 : Peace
2012 : Cleanliness

(Do not choose this question only to write something like this – I had a friend. Her name was Music. – immature) Your take on this question can be either fictional or factual. Refrain yourself from using the title as a name of a person or a pet or anything else that closely related to a name.


Nature SPM 1119

We have neither Summer nor Winter

Neither Autumn nor Spring.

We have instead the days

When the gold sun shines on the lush green canefields-


The days when the rain beats like bullet on the roofs

And there is no sound but thee swish of water in the gullies

And trees struggling in the high Jamaica winds.

Also there are the days when leaves fade from off guango trees’

And the reaped canefields lie bare and fallow to the sun.

But best of all there are the days when the mango and the logwood blossom

When bushes are full of the sound of bees and the scent of honey,

When the tall grass sways and shivers to the slightest breath of air,

When the buttercups have paved the earth with yellow stars

And beauty comes suddenly and the rains have gone.

Hugh Doston (“Dossie”) Carberry was born July 12, 1921, the son of sir John Carberry, a former Chief Justice of Jamaica, and Lady Georgina Carberry, in Montreal, Canada. He came to Jamaica in infancy and spent most of his life there. He had his primary education at Decarteret school in Mandeville, Jamaica and then attended Jamaica College. After working with the Civil Service, to which he qualified as second out of over 100 applicants, Carberry went to St. Catherrine College, Oxford University, where he obtained his B. A. and B. C. L.. He read Law at Middle Temple and was called to the Bar in 1951, then returning to Jamaica to engage in private practice.

In 1954, Carberry married Dorothea, and they had two sons, Martin and John, and a daughter, Christine. In addition to his career in law, Carberry was a poet and gave outstanding service in the cultural field, being a member of the Managing Committee of the Little Theatre since 1951. A devout Christian, he was also a pillar of the Providence Methodist church as Class Co-leader. Carberry was Clerk to the Houses of Parliament from 1969-1978 and a member of the commonwealth Parliamentary Association. He was appointed Judge of the Jamaican court of appeal in 1978 and served for a decade. H. D. Carberry died on June 28, 1989.

The poem tells of the weather conditions in Jamaica although it does not have the four seasons of spring, summer, autumn and winter. The weather conditions of golden sunny days and wet rainy days are just as good and are almost equivalent to the four seasons.

Lush – Healthy growth
Magnificently  – wonderfully, grandly, beautifully
Swish – The sound made by moving water
Gullies  – Channels cut out in the earth by persistent rainfall
Struggling – Fighting to survive; moving with great physical effort
Fade – Lose their colour
Fallow – Left bare (in order to recover natural fertility)
Paved  – Covered


Beauty of nature
Appreciation of one own country
Appreciate nature


We should appreciate what we have in our own country
We should not long for what we do not have.
We should appreciate our homeland.
We should appreciate the beauty of nature.

Appreciative and happy
Carefree and light-hearted
Sense of beauty


•Imagery – e.g. ‘gold sun’, ‘lush green fields’, ‘trees struggling’

•Alliteration – e.g. ‘sways and shivers to the slightest breath of air’

•Symbols – e.g. ‘gold sun’ – symbol of summer, ‘rains’ – symbol of winter

•Contrast – e.g. ‘beauty’ or summer is compared with ‘rains’ or winter

•Figurative Language  – Simile – ‘rain beats like bullets’

•Metaphor – e.g. ‘the buttercups paved the earth with yellow stars’

•Personification – ‘buttercups have paved the earth’ …  buttercups have been personified as having laid tiles

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